A couple or 3 things stand out, that should not be "written in stone" yet.

Hard-capped within a YEAR... We voted to hard-cap SPI because token sales had flatlined. I like the fact that 1,000,000 is again the GOAL but if sales are still pretty brisk in that first year, why drop the hardcap below a million? Should be a community voting thing, we'll for sure know more in 6-9 months anyway.
Capping at 250k (see above) and I thought SPI had the "club charter" because that was the cleanest and easiest way to keep everything LEGAL and clutter free.
Which brings me to...
Sending 10% (or anything) to SPInvest LEO, unless SPI-LEO is also serving LBI. Mixing the 2 clubs might be a no-no, and should also be part of a club charter or not. FWIW.

Other than these relatively minor points, it's Great!